Heartfelt, A Poem

I have been thinking about you
about us
the way our hearts beat
for one another


I know nothing is for sure
but I want to know you, to love you,
your thoughts and speech,
your smile, eyes, and humbleness


And if you go,
one day you’ll be back
If not in person
You’ll be back in my thoughts

  • Saranda

    You are truly amazing❤️❤️❤️

    28/06/2017 at 5:16 pm
  • This is so sweet. I love how they admire/love the other person so much that even if they loose them permanently they will always be there even in their thoughts.

    29/06/2017 at 11:44 am
  • I loved this… Especially the last lines. Love is actually staying in someone’s thoughts forever!

    29/06/2017 at 2:06 pm
  • This is powerful stuff! Beautifully written! You’re very talented!

    29/06/2017 at 3:18 pm
  • I love this. So sweet, it reminds me one of my favourite Disney quotes “if some day we can’t be together, keep me in your heart and I’ll stay there forever”.

    29/06/2017 at 4:09 pm
  • nigeriacustomer

    This is with deep impact. It kind of softens the cold side of the heart that life struggles tends to build.

    29/06/2017 at 4:40 pm
  • Freya Farrington

    so deep, meaningful and for me being part of a military family, so relatable! I love these words

    29/06/2017 at 4:47 pm
  • I agree that love can still exist even if the other person is not there. Like you said you can still be in another persons thoughts as they can be in yours x

    29/06/2017 at 5:23 pm
  • Oh this is so beautiful and very sweet indeed. You are very talented at writing and instilling that emotion in others.

    29/06/2017 at 5:35 pm
  • I had to read this a few times as it is just so touching. I hope the person you wrote this about knows about it as I would be delighted if someone wrote this about me.

    29/06/2017 at 9:00 pm
  • This is a beautiful poem, it was really heartfelt. I think it’s great that you opened up and said this.

    29/06/2017 at 10:56 pm
  • raisingyourpetsnaturally

    Very touching message. Lovely photo too. <3

    30/06/2017 at 1:39 am
  • alisonrost

    Such a beautiful thought for the day. It reminds me of my dog I lost just a few months ago. I’d do anything to have him right here with me, but that’s not possible. Instead he holds a big piece of my heart. x

    30/06/2017 at 4:24 am
  • Oh gosh, you said it perfectly, I don’t know if there’s much more to say. I need to write to my hubby a love letter soon!

    30/06/2017 at 11:28 am
  • It is such a beautiful piece of poety. There is something beautiful and lyric about having someone travel across your thoughts.

    30/06/2017 at 4:05 pm
  • So beautiful… and romantic! Almost could feel the goodbye?

    30/06/2017 at 10:56 pm
  • This is lovely, the last line is very poignant

    01/07/2017 at 7:26 am

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